Arualiaa's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slender Survival]

The atmosphere was good, but I think that you could make the character die if Slendy catches him, because it has happened to me and there are no consequences. Also, it's too linear and repetitive, it would be a great improvement to add more level types, and switch between them more smoothly, you can't be in a neigbourhood and suddenly appear in the middle of a forest. I would add too a running motion (for example, holding spacebar while walking) to escape from Slendy, which would cost double the stamina that walking takes, but it would make escaping him and losing less sanity more effective. And it also would be risky, because as he can appear at any moment, if you are low in stamina you can't run and you would have to walk, and therefore, lose sanity.
Also, it would make a nice bonus to make a discouraging message appear in the screen every time you find a note, like "HE IS NEAR" or "PLEASE HELP Mnvnv" (nvnv symbolizes an irregular line, as if that person couldn't finish the message), or "YOU WILL DIE YOUNG". You know, sentences like that, to improve the uncanny feeling.
With all of the above, being a more complex game, I think it would be worth 4 or 5 stars. Anyway, good job!

Brunodev responds:

Hey Arualiaa, thanks for all the suggestions, and yeah I got your point :)! Thanks for your review and rating!

[Play By Heart]

I-I'm on the verge of tears. And I don't cry easly. Great fucking job.

[Persist]

Beautiful. Truly beautiful. The end nearly made me cry.

[Pokemon Tower Defense]

Trade

Trouble catching a Magikarp? I've got two for trade! I just want a Vulpix, Bellsprout or Poliwag at any level, shiny or not. PM me :D

[Super Mario Castle]

Very addictive!

It's a simple but good idea, and the challenge to jump higher and higher never gets old.

[Epic Battle Fantasy 2]

A very good game!

It's way better than 1 ^^
Also, I TOTALLY love the power metal attack :D Through the fire and flames FTW lol and the guitar sword is pure win :D (The screamer one is epic as well... but it would have been more awesome the exorcist girl one)